What was the most exciting part of the book. When Noor got the news about the scholarship. She could get a good education. Travel to the States and send for her dad and sister. Their entire life would change, they would be free.
Is the title a good one or a poor one and why? The title fits the book.
Find one word that describes a character in your book very well. Driven - He wanted to teach everyone he could, how to survive. He searched for Noor. He tried to help her family. He wanted to marry her, regardless of the problems it would bring. He paid cash to a family, so they wouldn't marry off their 12 year old daughter. He was to pay cash yearly, so she could remain in school.
Disclosure: I received a review copy of this book from the author.